Buzz and Zip were heading home to planet Zero. Zip climbed into one of the sleeping pods and closed the door. The computer suddenly lit up. The ship zoomed forward and started to roll. As suddenly as it started, the rolling stopped. Buzz picked himself up off the window. The black hole had taken him into another galaxy. The computer lit up again. Buzz took a deep breath and looked at the controls. He closed his eyes and crossed all his arms and fingers as the ship zoomed forward. He was so close that he could see the whites of their eyes. Then, Buzz did what he always did when something went wrong. Buzz didn't know how many buttons he pushed when he crashed onto the controls.
This story is very cute. Buzz is careless. Buzz is cute. This is exciting adventure. It is good. I like it.
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Reference
Reilly. Carmel, (2007), Buzz Takes Over, Melbourne. Australia, Nelson Australia Pty Ltd.
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