Freewrite: my favorite places, hot spring

I like hot spring. I often go to hot spring with my friends. In hot spring, we talk a lot of things for long time. I can get rid of stress. Recently, I am very busy, so I can't go to hot spring. I want to go to hot spring now! In addition, I often go to footbath. I often go Tamana. There is a famous footbath in Tamana. I enjoy driving a car and talking.

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Freewrite: my favorite places, living room

My favorite room is living room of my house. I often relax in living room. I often enjoy watching TV and talking with my family. My family is unique. We always laugh and smile. My father and mother's talk are very fun and interesting. When I talk them, they listen to my talk seriously. I often consult to them and they give me good advices. Living room is oasis for me.

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Freewrite: my favorite places, airport

My favorite place is airport. I like airplane and I like watching and boarding airplanes. I work a part time job at airport. I want to be a flight attendant. If I can be a flight attendant, I want to go many places all over the world, and talk with a lot of foreign countries' people. I want to go a lot of places where I go for the first time, I want  to have many good experiences. I have to study hard to be a flight attendant, so I want to enjoy studying.

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My Language Skills

• Past : 10 years ago (& 5 years ago)

10 years ago when I was 9 years old.
I had never learned English. I didn't know about English at all.
5 years ago when I was 14 years ago. I was junior high school student. I started to study English and I became to be interested in English. I often sing English song and read short story. I enjoyed studying English.

• Present : Now 

Now, I study English in university. I am busy to do homework, but it useful for me to improve my English skills. I try to do many things to improve my English skills. For example, I will accept a boy as a host family next month, and I will go to Canada to study abroad, home stay and intern. I have many chances, so I try a lot of things for my English skills. I enjoy study English.

• Future : 10 years from now (& 5 years from now)

I want to be a fright attendant. English is essential for it. I want to communicate with many people all over the world, and tell good points of Japan. In the future, English will be more important in the world. I want to use English fluently. I want to go every where and know and see a lot of things.

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Essay 1-02b: University Life

We will write about university’s class, club activities, study abroad, and friend.

There are many students in KGU. They love KGU, because there are many good friends, experiences, events and interesting things. Most of them always feel happy.

First, there are many interesting classes about English. The student who study English at KGU have many things that they have to do as Homework. They are busy everyday, but they enjoy classes. They learn about reading, writing, speaking and listening. In addition, some students study U.S. history of literature, English literature outline and science of Japanese outline.

The students who is in English department are very interested in English and want to improve them English skill. English classes, reading, writing, speaking and listening, become tomorrow's provisions. In these classes, they use blog, newspaper, news videos, movies about history, powerwords and English central. It is very difficult for them to accomplish them, but they try them hard. They want to use English fluently.

Second, there are many club and it called circle. They  join the circle thet they are interesting. One of all circles is traveling abroad society. They who are in this cilcle go to Korea twice in a year and do many activities on every Wednesday. For example, they play sports, go to driving, eating dinner, do games, watch DVD's, take a hot spring bath and travel anywhere.

They enjoy them very much. They are looking forward to doing them every week.  

Futhermore, they went to Korea in this spring vacation. They enjoyed eating some foods and shopping clothes and cosmetics. They want to go there again.

Third, about study abroad. They who are a KGU student have many oppotunities to go study abroad. Some students will  go to Canada to study abroad, internship and home stay. They want to improve themself English skill and have many experiences. They want to learn about culture. They want to go and see many place. They are looking forward to going.

The girls of second year student are very fashionable. There are a lot of smart dresserｓ. They always wear fashionable clothes, and fashionable shoes.  They are always careful about their appearance. They buy some clothes at PALCO. It's one of a fashionable shop in Kumamoto. Sometimes, there is a sale time in PALCO, so they go there. They spend on them shopping about thirty thousand yen. They have a part time job, so they have much money. Because of it, they can buy a lot of clothes by themselves.　They study about fashion. Fashion is a very important for them. They like cool fashion, cute fashion, gorgeous fashion or simple fashion. Sometimes, they bought fashion magazines and study fashion by use them.

They like cafeteria too. Especially, they like a nostalgic cafeteria, so they search about nostalgic cafeterias. When they find it, they go there, and evaluate its taste. If there really take to it, they go again and again. Sometimes, they take care about their weight, but they can’t patience to eat and drink. They often go to French restaurant. They very like French, so they often go there to eat lunch.

They like cosmetics and big name brands. They are particular about their cosmetics. Some people like KATE. KATE is famous in Japan. They sometimes change their cosmetics maker, and they choose cosmetics which are suited them. Many second year students have big mane brands. COACH is the most popular maker among them. They have COACH’s wallet, COACH’s bag and COACH’s accessories. They are generally given it by their parents. Sometimes they are given by their boyfriend or their friends. They give a big name brands for their friends who are birthday. They get along with their friends.

The girls of second year student are enjoying their university life. Probably, they are more and more fashionable.

There are many chances, interesting things and friends in KGU. There are a lot of things that we have to do,  but they study hard to improve them English skills. They enjoy and feel happy everyday.  It is very important for them to learn in this university. They try much more things and they want to spend school life without repentance, so they have to study hard.

Content for this joint essay came from previous blog posts:
Matsuoka, Yuria. (2014.05.24).Essay 1-02a: University Life [Web log post]. http://yuriannu0107.blogspot.jp/2014/05/essay-1-02a-university-life.html



Yamashita, Maki. (2014.05.23). Essays 1-02a [Web log post]. http://fe13152.blogspot.jp/2014/05/essays-1-02a.html

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Essay 1-02a: University life

There are many students in KGU. They love KGU, because there are many good friends, experiences, events and interesting things. Most of them always feel happy. First, there are many interesting classes about English. The student who studies English at KGU have many things that they have to do as Homework. They are busy everyday, but they enjoy the classes. They learn about reading, writing, speaking and listening. In addition, some students study U.S. history of literature, English literature outline and science of Japanese outline. The students who are in the English department are very interested in English and want to improve their English skill. English classes, reading, writing, speaking and listening, become tomorrow's provisions. In these classes, they use blogs, newspaper, news videos, movies about history, power words and English central. It is very difficult for them to accomplish them, but they try them hard. They want to use English fluently. Second, there are many clubs and they called a circle. They join the circle that they are interesting. One of all circles is traveling abroad society. They who are in this circle go to Korea twice in a year and do many activities on every Wednesday. For example, they play sports, go to driving, eating dinner, do games, watch DVD's, take a hot spring bath and travel anywhere. They enjoy them very much. They look forward to doing them every week. Furthermore, they went to Korea in this spring vacation. They enjoyed eating some foods and shopping clothes and cosmetics. They want to go there again. Third, about study abroad. They who are a KGU student have many opportunities to go study abroad. Some students will go to Canada to study abroad, internship and home stay. They want to improve themselves English skill and have many experiences. They want to learn about the culture. They want to go and see many places. They are looking forward to going. There are many chances, interesting things and friends in KGU. They enjoy and feel happy everyday. They try many more things and they want to spend school life without repentance.

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University Life

I love KGU, because there are many good friends, experiences, events and interesting things. I always feel happy.

First, I will talk about my classes. I have many things that I have to do as Homework. I am busy everyday, but I enjoy classes. I learn about reading, writing, speaking and listening. In addition, I study U.S. history of literature, English literature outline and science of Japanese outline.

I am very interested in English and want to improve my English skill. English classes, reading, writing, speaking and listening, become tomorrow's provisions. In these classes, I use blog, newspaper, news videos, movies about history, powerwords and English central. It is very difficult for me to accomplish them, but I try them hard. I want to use English fluently.

Second, I will talk about my club activities. I join the traveling abroad society. We go to Korea twice in a year and do many activities on every Wednesday. For example, we play sports, go to driving, eating dinner, do games, watch DVD's, take a hot spring bath and travel anywhere.

I enjoy them very much. I am looking forward to doing them every week.  

Futhermore, I went to Korea in this spring vacation. I enjoyed eating some foods and shopping clothes and cosmetics. I want to go there again.

Third, I will talk about study abroad. I am going to go Canada to study abroad, internship and home stay. I want to improve my English skill and have many experiences. I decided to try it immediately. I want to learn about culture. I want to go and see many place. I am looking forward to going. First of all, I have to study English more.

I have many chances, interesting things and friends. I enjoy and feel happy everyday. I try much more things and I want to spend school life without repentance.

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