BR 2-18: Buzz Takes Over (Reilly. Carmel, 2007)

 

 

Buzz and Zip were heading home to planet Zero. Zip climbed into one of the sleeping pods and closed the door. The computer suddenly lit up. The ship zoomed forward and started to roll. As suddenly as it started, the rolling stopped. Buzz picked himself up off the window. The black hole had taken him into another galaxy. The computer lit up again. Buzz took a deep breath and looked at the controls. He closed his eyes and crossed all his arms and fingers as the ship zoomed forward. He was so close that he could see the whites of their eyes. Then, Buzz did what he always did when something went wrong. Buzz didn't know how many buttons he pushed when he crashed onto the controls.

 

This story is very cute. Buzz is careless. Buzz is cute. This is exciting adventure. It is good. I like it.

[158 words]

Reference

Reilly. Carmel, (2007), Buzz Takes Over, Melbourne. Australia, Nelson Australia Pty Ltd. 

BR 2-17: Rescue! (Brychta, 2001)

Wilf and Biff were blowing bubbles. Suddenly the magic key began to glow. The magic took them to a flat rocky place. Suddenly they heard the sound of an aeroplane. The aeroplane flew round in a circle. Then it touched down. The plane spun round and stopped. The pilot climbed out of the wreched plane. It was Princess Aisha. Biff and Wilf had met her before. Aisha has come to rescue her sister. They set off. They climbed rock face. They made bubbles and run. Aisha started the lorry and bounched tyres towards the men. The road was very steep and narrow. The road to slip away. The lorry began to slide down into the gorge. The lorry stopped on the edge of the river. They sat on tube and out into the river. At last they floated into calm water. Many kind people took Aisha and Lisa home to their place. Biff and Wilf came back their home too. They enjoyed adventure.

It is very wonderful story. But it is very exciting. I like travel and adventure. I want to have exciting adventure someday. It is important to care of our body.

[193 words]

Reference

Brychta. Roderick, Rescue!, (2001), China, Oxford University Press.